Friday, September 28, 2012

What Space?





In my paper, What Space?, I analyzed Frank Vanclay’s Place Matters and integrated  my analysis of his lens into my observation of the Hassayampa Academic Village dining hall. When I read Vanclay’s piece I thought that he has an interesting outlook on the way people make connections to the world around them, however, I thought that rather than the people connecting those feelings to the space, they are using the space to make comfortable connections to the people around them. I thought that the space, which does become a place when it means something to someone, is actually a portal to the crucial connections that people make with one another. I wrote about what an effective platform “Hassy” is for individuals to make connections to each other, thus, to ultimately establish a sense of community with everyone in Hassayampa.  From prior knowledge, I also incorporated the importance of feeling a sense of belonging, as it is crucial to human beings, and related it to the reason that places are so important for people and why the connections people make are more important than the actual space itself, even though the space is a major contributor.  I did a small amount of research on the human need to feel a sense of belonging also just to make sure that my claims are accurate. I described the place, the people, and their interactions/actions only based on facts and information that I know for sure.

Friday, September 21, 2012


Rochelle Skorka
Santana
September 21, 2012
Deductive Outline

 

Thesis:  It is fundamental for us as humans to make connections to the spaces we encounter and turn them into places where we can connect to and find a sense of belonging
(Found in the conclusion, not so strongly in introduction: FIX THAT!)

Main Points:

Paragraph ½ (should be one paragraph):

·         “space” is transformed into a “place” when it becomes meaningful to an individual

·         it is individuals themselves who must connect with a locality **redundant?

·         Hassy has become more than just a dining hall because of the people and the intimate connections they have made there ****use details to explain why I’ve come to that conclusion

·         *****need to explain why it’s important to connect to the space

 

 

Paragraph 3:

·         It is human nature to have a sense of belonging and places are the portals which allow us to develop that feeling of connection. ****should be in introduction? Much like thesis statement

·         Feelings of being bonded to a community are important for an individual’s self-worth, their well-being, their involvement in their own work, and their success

·          

 

 

 

Complain but still go there? (5th ave./polk street) Looking in on place from window without experiencing the place=no connection, no sense of belonging, just a space, not a place- known as the street, not home

 

Conclusion

Thursday, September 20, 2012

Writing Project #1 draft


Rochelle Skorka
English 101
September 17, 2012
Writing Project 1


What Space?
Hidden from the sweltering heat of the desert sun, in the center of the Hassayampa Academic Village, a dining hall stands to serve as more than just a cafeteria. To students here, the “Hassy” dining hall can serve as a place to unwind after a never-ending afternoon of studying, a rowdy pep rally before a Sun Devil football game, or simply a favorite hang-out spot for friends. Following stagnant mornings, the fast arriving twelve o’clock hour swells with students of all types, from committed early-morning athletes to weary, up-all-night book worms and groggy, late risers, who all wait patiently in a line that seems to span a mile long and a mile wide. As kitchen staff inside hurriedly prepare each station, anxious students flood the space, which is bursting with maroon and gold decor, in search of tasty food, an available seat, and good company.  The afternoon hustle and bustle of the crowded room generates what is initially an overpowering buzz, comprised of lunch line orders, the latest gossip, and casual chit chat, but which eventually blends together into the background, becoming merely white noise behind the concentration among your own lunch time conversations. To some, the Hassayampa dining hall may register simply as just another over-crowded, college- life cafeteria with dirty tables and empty ketchup bottles, while to others, Hassy can be identified as a personal, noteworthy place, one where friendships were born, where embarrassing moments transpired, where close friends routinely meet up to enjoy each other’s company, or as a bigger picture, where everyone can come and feel like part of the Arizona State University community and family. Through this local place, people connect, converse, and find personal connection to a place that becomes a home.
Vanclay begins his piece Place Matters by explaining that “space” is transformed into a “place” when it becomes meaningful to an individual: “Ultimately, however, it is individuals themselves who must connect with a locality-who must develop their personal attachment to place. ‘Place’ exists when the individual can tell a story about a specific locality that indicates personal meaning” (Vanclay, 4). Everyone who utilizes the Hassy dining hall has some kind of connection to the space, whether they are aware or not, that is unique to them because “Place-making happens at multiple levels and in multiple ways…”(6). In the back corner, a tight-knit group of friends squeeze into the large, round, corner booth, paying no attention to the lack of elbow room, constantly chatting and laughing, even long after they have finished their meals. At the soda machine, a witty young man passively compliments a shy girl in a small effort to flirt, while at a table nearby, a couple holds hands and shares a soda or dessert in the same spot where that once nervous boy finally asked the girl from the sandwich line to their very first date. Pairs of acquaintances fill the span of the parallel middle tables engaging with one another based on the fact that they found someone else with a common hobby, friend, or home town.  In merely a moment of observation, one could discover that Hassy has become more than just a dining hall because of the people and the intimate connections they have made there with the space because of each other.
The people among the hall obviously enjoy their time there, as it has become more than just an eatery, and grown into a bustling hub for fun and activity. “Thus, the perceived ambience of a location, its perceived safety and security, the level of background noise, any evident odours, the level of ambient light, and the view and the elements in that view (and more) are all part of what makes up the personal experience of space, and therefore are part of place” (4). When anyone makes a personal, emotional attachment to a place it is based off of the details in which affected their emotions, so that a specific smell may trigger the feeling of love, or the long line reminding one that all of their friends are waiting inside, with stories to make them laugh until they can’t breathe anymore. Everyone that makes connections to this space has at least one story to tell, whether it be about the time they collided with the attractive boy from their English class and dropped their plates, or the story about meeting their current significant other, and those stories are another example of how we as people intimately define space and identify with it. Based on the volume of students, their interactions, and their steady routine visits, it is fair to say that the Hassy is one of those places that has become filled with stories and personal attachments, transforming from simply a space to an inviting place.
Everyone inside once looked through the full length windows of Hassy into a space that they had yet to experience, a blank canvas, with no memories or stories to tell, but from the moment each person stepped through its doors for the first time,  the space that we now know as “Hassy” has transformed into a personal dimension of place. At a glance, an outsider may only see a space crammed with busy people, milling around absorbed in their own reality and routine, merely stopping by as they go on about their classes, studying, or hobbies, when in fact, the Hassy dining hall is a place where a community gathers, communicates, celebrates, and ascends from a solely individual connection to an ultimate communal identity where each individual can build a true sense of belonging. It is human nature to have a sense of belonging and places are the portal which allow us to develop that feeling of connection. Feelings of being bonded to a community are important for an individual’s self-worth, their well-being, their involvement in their own work, and their success. Since everyone in the dining hall undoubtedly makes some sort of personal connection to the place, there is ultimately a sense of community. People come to the dining hall not only to spend time with their friends one on one, but also to bond with their fellow classmates and Sun Devils before a Saturday night home  football game, to dress up for themed dinners, or to find out what is going on during the weekends. All of these things require personal communication between all groups of people using the dining hall and creates stories and memories that bring everyone involved together, as a community, or sometimes like a family. This sense of connection to the space, both on an individual level and as a community, helps all of us student feel a sense of unity and togetherness which gives us confidence throughout the rest of the university, leading to more involvement,  enjoyment, and success .
Vanclay makes the profound statement that places are “… the contemporary everyday connection individuals have with their local spaces that gives their life meaning in the present…Place is fundamental to humanity…to be human is to have and to know your place” (9). It is fundamental for us as humans to make connections to the spaces we encounter and turn them into places that we can connect to and find a sense of belonging. In the college setting, this is crucial for students to know as we come across so many new places, faces, and no true sense of property or home. To find that sense of togetherness, which happens through the creation of direct connections to places, one needs to recognize and appreciate the feelings and reactions they have to the space around them. The lens that Vanclay utilizes throughout his piece explains that when we find that personal meaning and connection to a space it becomes a place- in real life application, Vanclay’s idea is analogous to the aphorism of a house becoming a home. 

Thursday, September 13, 2012

Constructing a Lens


The Mesa Trail Organic Response:

In her short story Mesa Trail, Mary Austin generates a zealous tone about Mesa and all that inhabits the desert land. Austin does this through explicit descriptions, the use of literary devices like simile and personification, and a voice in her writing which leads the audience to believe that she is an expert on the subject of her story. Her explanations of such a  collection of native plant and animals, directions of the trails, and descriptions of the land based on the time of day and season makes me believe that she is familiar and knowledgeable, thus trustworthy in her writing.

Polk Street Organic Response:

Frank Norris' Polk Street is much like the short story Mesa Trail in the way that the author uses specific, descriptive dialogue to create a perfect picture in the readers' minds of the environment that he is writing about. Norris chooses to point out and reflect on elements of the street that audiences could easily relate to, making it easy for a reader to connect to his writing and extract central tensions, morals, lessons, or questions from his piece.

Place Matters Organic Response:

Vanclay's piece Place Matters puts forth valuable information concerning places, the transformation of spaces, and how people connect to and respond to places. The connection that the author makes with places and the dimensions of spaces that he talks about made me realize why the authors of the readings above chose to write about a place in order convey a message/point.

Joining the Conversation: Chapter 14:

This chapter about plagiarism is important to remember as we use references in our writing project. It is important to pay close attention to the Research Ethics portions of this chapter and the tips to avoid plagiarism because they are useful not only for avoiding plagiarism, but also for work habits, successful studying and time management.

 

                                                    The Work of Constructing a Lens

Constructing a lens can be a difficult task. The concept of analyzing a viewpoint and creating an argument, or lens, that can prove functional in a new space can be confusing and difficult to narrow down sometimes. That has been my biggest obstacle so far, since there can be multiple lens options within any piece of literature, and a lens can be subjective based on the audience and what they interpret from the reading. Between class last week and Chapter 16 of Joining the Conversation, I  have inferred that the most important guideline for constructing a lens lies within organization and focusing on a central idea which can be functional within any new piece.  Since the lens must work to focus on a similar concept between two or more pieces, establishing a central idea and using details and concepts that your audience can relate to on a personal level, that still relate directly to the central idea (classified as following an organizational patter in the textbook), are the two key suggestions that I can use for direction as I construct a lens, along with the steps we have rehearsed in-class. Since the textbook is focused on an essay-style writing technique, it states that a central idea is usually asserted in one topic sentence with the following sentences to elaborate on the topic, but I feel that in other writing situations, following an organizational pattern within the piece will help the audience to  recognize a pattern or repetitious idea, making it easier for them to "...focus on your ideas and argument if they understand how you are organizing your paragraph" (Palmquist, 555). With that technique, I feel that the audience can easier recognize your lens and find a way to apply it to any related texts and that I have a better understanding and more practice associated with constructing a lens of my own.





NOTES:

Rochelle Skorka
English 101
Observational Notes

 

Memorial Union Observational Notes

·         bustling

·         loud

·         many ethnicities

·         many choices of food

·         advertisements everywhere

·         social que- some people pick up on them, some don't

·         interactions between men and women- awkward

·         people won't sit next to anyone they don't know

·         self absorbed- people not in tune with their surroundings

·         shows our generations dependability on technology/lack of social skills

·         all ages

·         division of personalities (sororities, "nerd" type)

·         hard to concentrate here

·         just a walk way to avoid the heat outside

·         a social gathering place

·         well-known spot for people to find each other

·         associate the MU with good feelings, due to food and dessert places

·         alluring smells

·         helpful ASU employees

·         bright

Short Stories

·         very detailed- enough to create perfect picture in the audience's minds

·         conjure feelings/emotions with places

·         relatable details (buttons on a jacket, cars, buildings, the sky, the horizon, etc)

·         personal story

·         literary devices: simile, personification, strong diction,

·         personal- detail create tone-create sense that author is expert/trustworthy

·         elements easy to relate to, making it easy for a reader to connect/extract central tensions, morals, lessons, or questions

·         places-personal meanings-positive and or negative feelings- connect to audience

·         place exists when an individual can tell a story about the place****

·         place-rarely static and frequently dynamic- places are personal to experience

Chapter 14 Joining the Conversation

·         focus on central idea

·         have evidence or details to support the idea

·         details to capture your audience's attention*

·         organizational pattern

·         creates effective writing

·         chronology, description, definition, cause/effect- allows reader to anticipate also allows them to recognize any repetition= draw the message/find the lens

·         multiple perspective can also work

·         use to reflect your purpose or the roles you are trying to adapt